Just when i thought it was love
i was proven wrong
that instant she gave more attention to my other brother
she had a favorite son and that son aint me
i dont know why or what it is
but i know that im not what she wants me to be
i try hard to earn her trust, nothing works
each attempt to gain her trust results in failure
a son who cant please his mother
the very thought of that hearts
our mother-son relationship
STRAINED
she didnt raise me, and to think i could win her love
INSANE
i guess i have no one but myself
to BLAME
to make matters even worse
my own father dont even like me
our father-son relationship
GONE
the love and attention i get from him
NONE
i get treated like a complete stranger
bet they wouldnt even help me if my life was in jeopardy
DANGER
never FAIR
if i wanted help, they'll look at me with a blank face
just STARE
and to think i thought it was love
NOT
i was wrong, my mind is heated
HOT
i feel lost as if i was never born
BANNED
right now at this very moment, tears begin to stroll down my cheeks
CRYING
very nice . You a great writer
ReplyDeleteWow this is good.. I feel the same way about my mother..
ReplyDeleteOmg You Seriously Just Made My Day . I Would Like To SEE You Recite One Of Your Poems . Manee This Is Good . I'm Feeling It . (=
ReplyDeleteThis is really nice and emotional. I get the same treatment and still cant figure out why! Keep writing!!
ReplyDeleteOmg as another writer and poet this peom struck me. Tears falling from my face. This poem took me to another place. It is so deep and thought provoking with each word as the poem continued. The more I could feel you saying these words. I would love to see and hear you recite this poem. In both forms it would be beautiful.
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